VelvetBabylon's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The monster]

You did a great job achieving a sense of depth, your color choices were solid for the subject, and I especially like the definition and sculpting of the features- particularly the area around the eyes. The only improvements I could suggest would be making the bolts in the neck more similar in size/shape, and being a little more detailed with the deformation of the forehead- that part looks partially complete, and while it's not aesthetically unpleasant as-is, a bit more definition regarding how/why the forehead is shaped this way would add to the story. Overall, very well done!

afiboy69 responds:

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[De'mos]

Desire demon?

Very nice, if unpolished. I love the colors and the angle of the head, but she seems to be missing hands, and the curve of her hip/thigh is a little awkward. It looks very much like a desire demon from Dragon Age... being a DA addict, I've been seeing a lot of them. :P (Not necessarily a bad thing, on either count! Heh.)